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Title: remember when posting:
Post by: atomicpunk on September 03, 2008, 05:56:43 PM

Here's alittle something to remember when posting.In general--and this type of analysis is very tenuous--an average sentence length below 14 words per sentence may indicate that you use too many short sentences and you need to learn how to combine and/or subordinate ideas.  If your average sentence length is well above 22 words a sentence, you may be piling too much freight on your sentences and have a prose style that is dense and tangled.  If your average word length falls between 14 and 22, you need to look at your sentences to see if there is some variety or if they are all about the same length.This should help you structure your post and actually think about what your writing. ;) :P

Title: Re: remember when posting:
Post by: nateogreato on September 04, 2008, 03:10:19 AM

What the heck???

Title: Re: remember when posting:
Post by: mortas on September 04, 2008, 05:15:51 AM

ok lol

Title: Re: remember when posting:
Post by: puzzykat on September 04, 2008, 04:43:02 PM

thats a lot of rambling.  could you paraphrase that? i started forgetting right about the time you said here's a little something to remember. :P

Title: Re: remember when posting:
Post by: Apollo on September 05, 2008, 07:26:06 PM

Well I believe he should have taken some of his advice, to start out with. Better yet, start all over again..lol

Title: Re: remember when posting:
Post by: puzzykat on September 06, 2008, 08:16:59 AM

haha.  atomicpunk could you send your post to puntaman?

Title: Re: remember when posting:
Post by: underdog140 on September 21, 2008, 09:22:20 AM

right.........so let all do that than .....by the way how
many words do you have in your post?...lol

Title: Re: remember when posting:
Post by: cow344 on September 22, 2008, 07:45:55 PM

Me no got no idea..... ____  underdog140, what`s yous thinks abouts mine!   LOL

Title: Re: remember when posting:
Post by: jolub on September 25, 2008, 11:39:17 PM

Quote from: atomicpunk on September 03, 2008, 05:56:43 PM

Here's alittle something to remember when posting.In general--and this type of analysis is very tenuous--an average sentence length below 14 words per sentence may indicate that you use too many short sentences and you need to learn how to combine and/or subordinate ideas.  If your average sentence length is well above 22 words a sentence, you may be piling too much freight on your sentences and have a prose style that is dense and tangled.  If your average word length falls between 14 and 22, you need to look at your sentences to see if there is some variety or if they are all about the same length.This should help you structure your post and actually think about what your writing. ;) :P

Are we back in school in English class?

Title: Re: remember when posting:
Post by: eberetta1 on November 07, 2008, 11:27:05 AM

reading this post practically gave me a headache. It reminded me of
the longest name of something you can It sounds so cool to me, too.
Here it is... omelete supreme avec jambone. I picked that one up
at the carousel of progress at Disney World. It is simply an omelete
made with ham. 

Title: Re: remember when posting:
Post by: underdog140 on November 07, 2008, 12:13:48 PM

Quote from: cow344 on September 22, 2008, 07:45:55 PM

Me no got no idea..... ____  underdog140, what`s yous thinks abouts mine!   LOL

LOL ......I thinks yous post great.......LOL

Title: Re: remember when posting:
Post by: Apollo on December 02, 2008, 08:38:37 PM

I see Atomicpunk, never returned to straighten out, whatever he was trying to say.
Probably still has a hang over, from the time he started this mess.